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J.K. Rowling is the master of layering things within her scenes. She's also fantastic at raising the stakes from scene to scene, too. But how does she do itTune into this episode to hear Abigail K. Perry and I talk to Tim Grahl (the CEO of Story Grid) about what it was like to study Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone—what we learned from J.K. Rowling about writing scenes and so much more.⭐ Rate + Review + Follow on Apple Podcasts"I love the Fiction Writing Made Easy podcast!" ← If that sounds like you, please consider rating and reviewing this show! Your rating and review will help other writers find this podcast, and they're also super fun for me to read. Just click here, scroll all the way to the bottom, tap five stars to rate the show, and then select "Write a Review." Be sure to let me know your favorite episodes, too! Also, if you haven't done so already, make sure you're following the podcast! I'll be adding a bunch of bonus episodes to the feed, and if you're not following the show, there's a good chance you'll miss them. Click here to follow now!

Ever wonder how Rowling created such a fantastic, three-dimensional story world for her Harry Potter series?That's exactly what you'll hear in this week's brand-new podcast episode! Join me, Abigail K. Perry, and Tim Grahl, as we discuss the world-building in Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone—and what we learned from our analysis of this mega best seller.You'll hear us talk about things like:[02:38] How Rowling built a fantastic story world ripe for life and death conflicts (but in a way that's age-appropriate for middle-grade readers)[04:39] How Rowling focused on fleshing out the world-building details that mattered for book one—and introduced them to readers right alongside Harry[08:18] How to think about your own world-building (spoiler alert: you don't need to have everything figured out or perfectly mapped in your early drafts!)[12:43] How Rowling made every detail of her world count—and how she used those details to hide important plot clues and encourage character development[16:27] And so much more…If you like this episode, you'll LOVE my book, Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone: A Story Grid Masterwork Analysis Guide. Click here to pre-order a copy and get access to a collection of bonuses in addition to a copy of the book.⭐ Rate + Review + Follow on Apple Podcasts"I love the Fiction Writing Made Easy podcast!" ← If that sounds like you, please consider rating and reviewing this show! Your rating and review will help other writers find this podcast, and they're also super fun for me to read. Just click here, scroll all the way to the bottom, tap five stars to rate the show, and then select "Write a Review." Be sure to let me know your favorite episodes, too! Also, if you haven't done so already, make sure you're following the podcast! I'll be adding a bunch of bonus episodes to the feed, and if you're not following the show, there's a good chance you'll miss them. Click here to follow now!

On this week's episode, developmental editor Savannah helps Jac with her query letter, only for things to take a big turn. Find Savannah on her Instagram @savannah.gilb or her website https://www.savannahgilbo.com/ Sponsor: BetterHelp.com/BOOKTOK - to get 10% off your first month of therapy  Lumedeodorant.com and use code BOOKTALK for 15% off  Learn more about your ad choices. Visit megaphone.fm/adchoices

Ever wonder how Rowling created such a wonderful cast of quirky and relatable characters in the Harry Potter series? If so, tune into this episode to hear Abigail K. Perry, Tim Grahl, and me talk about the characters in Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone. You'll hear us talk about things like:[02:32] How to think about the number of characters you include in your story (and what we can learn from the characters Rowling highlighted in book one)[09:17] How to write a dynamic cast of characters that can help your protagonist grow and change (and, in Harry's case, aid or harm his ability to survive)[09:49] Why Rowling layered the forces of antagonism Harry faces in this first book (and why this was necessary based on his age and skill level)[17:07] How point of view choice affects our interpretation of the events in the story—and influences whether we classify certain characters as “good” or “evil”[20:26] And so much more…If you like this episode, you'll LOVE my book, Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone: A Story Grid Masterwork Analysis Guide. Click here to pre-order a copy and get access to a collection of bonuses in addition to a copy of the book.⭐ Rate + Review + Follow on Apple Podcasts"I love the Fiction Writing Made Easy podcast!" ← If that sounds like you, please consider rating and reviewing this show! Your rating and review will help other writers find this podcast, and they're also super fun for me to read. Just click here, scroll all the way to the bottom, tap five stars to rate the show, and then select "Write a Review." Be sure to let me know your favorite episodes, too! Also, if you haven't done so already, make sure you're following the podcast! I'll be adding a bunch of bonus episodes to the feed, and if you're not following the show, there's a good chance you'll miss them. Click here to follow now!

What made Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone a worldwide bestseller? Why does this story still resonate with readers almost thirty years later?And why did Abiagial and I agree to spend so much time dissecting every single scene and page to find out how and why it works?!Tune into this episode to hear Abigail K. Perry and I talk to Tim Grahl (the CEO of Story Grid) about what it was like to study Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone—why we chose this book, what we learned from our analysis, and so much more.⭐ Rate + Review + Follow on Apple Podcasts"I love the Fiction Writing Made Easy podcast!" ← If that sounds like you, please consider rating and reviewing this show! Your rating and review will help other writers find this podcast, and they're also super fun for me to read. Just click here, scroll all the way to the bottom, tap five stars to rate the show, and then select "Write a Review." Be sure to let me know your favorite episodes, too! Also, if you haven't done so already, make sure you're following the podcast! I'll be adding a bunch of bonus episodes to the feed, and if you're not following the show, there's a good chance you'll miss them. Click here to follow now!

This week, Jac and Amy interview developmental editor and book coach, Savannah Gilbo. Savannah coaches Jac and Amy with their own books and takes them through her process. Savannah is the host of the podcast Fiction Writing Made Easy. You can learn more about Savannah at her website https://www.savannahgilbo.com/ and follow her on Instagram @Savannah.Gilbo Learn more about your ad choices. Visit megaphone.fm/adchoices

This week on The Resilient Writers Radio Show, I'm chatting with Savannah Gilbo. Savannah Gilbo is a certified developmental editor and book coach who helps fiction authors write, edit, and publish stories that work. She's also the host of the top-rated Fiction Writing Made Easy podcast, where she delivers weekly episodes full of simple, actionable, and step-by-step strategies that you can implement in your writing right away. When she's not busy crafting her own stories, you can find Savannah curled up with a good book, a cozy blanket, and her three dogs. In this episode, we get into how to start writing a novel, covering five key areas that authors should consider before drafting: theme, genre, protagonist, setting, and plot.Savannah emphasizes the importance of addressing these areas to create a solid foundation, which helps prevent common pitfalls like writing without a clear direction or having a protagonist without a clear goal. She also discusses the value of community for writers, sharing experiences, and overcoming self-doubt.

The third (and final!) analysis in a 3-part episode series! Abigail and Savannah return for their final first chapter analysis in The Hunger Games series, this time analyzing the first chapter (and scene) of MOCKINGJAY by Suzanne Collins. Learn why they think this first chapter makes a splash, and how it emotionally pulls fans into the final chapter of a high stakes trilogy. Some key elements they explore include: How can you spell out a crisis without stiffening the stakes? How does this first chapter set up expectations for the whole story? How do you write a scene that advances the plot and develops characters? And more... P.S. If you'd like to learn more about how to start your manuscript with an engaging first chapter, check out the resources that inspired this episode's analysis: Mockingjay by Suzanne Collins The Writer's Guide to Beginnings by Paula Munier Story Grid by Shawn Coyne Story by Robert McKee Follow Abigail and Savannah: Website: www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo P.S. Don't miss Savannah's podcast, FICTION WRITING MADE EASY!

The second analysis in a 3-part episode series! Abigail and Savannah are back to analyze the first chapter of CATCHING FIRE by Suzanne Collins, the sequel in The Hunger Games phenomenon, and the second analysis in The Hunger Games first chapter deep dive episodes. Come listen to why Abigail and Savannah think this first chapter hooks, and why it sets the stage for arguably their favorite book in the series. Some key elements they explore include: How does the first chapter set up expectations for the whole book? How can you break down scenes in the first chapter? How do you raise the stakes in a sequel? How does each scene advance the plot and develop character(s)? Why does this chapter ground readers and entice us to turn the page? P.S. If you'd like to learn more about how to start your manuscript with an engaging first chapter, check out the resources that inspired this episode's analysis: Catching Fire by Suzanne Collins The Writer's Guide to Beginnings by Paula Munier Story Grid by Shawn Coyne Story by Robert McKee Follow Abigail and Savannah: Website: www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo P.S. Don't miss Savannah's podcast, FICTION WRITING MADE EASY!

The first analysis in what will be a 3-part episode series! Abigail and Savannah analyze the first chapter of the YA dystopian phenomenon, THE HUNGER GAMES by Suzanne Collins. This is one of Abigail's and Savannah's favorite series....ever...and their passion for this story shines in their discussion about what (1) sets up big picture expectations for the main plot, and (2) what makes the opening pages a great first chapter. Tune in now to hear Abigail and Savannah's analysis, and don't forget to share your thoughts a you listen! Some key elements they take deep dives on include: 7 key questions to ask about the opening pages (The Writer's Guide to Beginnings by Paula Munier) Characters we love (and why) When an opening of a daily routine works Scenes versus beats and how Savannah and Abigail view the difference How to raise the personal and public stakes (in this first book and in a series) Plus, more! Come study this juggernaut of a novel with Savannah and Abigail and let us know why you think the opening pages hook readers. P.S. Do you enjoy analyzing stories with Savannah and Abigailt? Learn more about their virtual book club, Book Notes. Sign up for their next meeting or purchase a recording of a past meeting >> Follow Abigail and Savannah: Website: www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo P.S. Don't miss Savannah's podcast, FICTION WRITING MADE EASY! Resources mentioned in this episode:• The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins• The Writer's Guide to Beginnings: How to Craft Story Openings That Sell by Paula Munier

Today I am SO EXCITED to have a powerhouse Female LEADER on The Wicked Salty Podcast...Melissa Gilbo! This powerful episode, "How To Be The CEO Of Your Life with Co-founder and CEO of the Women's Business League, Melissa Gilbo" is going to EMPOWER you to achieve your goals and become the strong, fearless Woman that you are! Melissa always knew that she was meant for more. Melissa is living her dream as an entrepreneur, building a national brand and helping business women reach their full potential, and love it! Once Melissa started her entrepreneurial journey, there was no stopping her.  Melissa's passion and love for helping other Women has led her to where she is now—CEO and Co-Founder of Women's Business League (WBL) + launching her own business as Melissa Gilbo Consulting.  In just a few short years, Melissa helped grow WBL from a local, networking group to an elite national network attracting extraordinary businesswomen from across the country. She went from an employee working a JOB to a heart-centered leader & CEO, building communities, a brand & changing the game for entrepreneurs everywhere. This episode is for the entrepreneurs and dream chasers, to let you know—it is possible. Everything that you're doing-- Keep showing up and never give up! Listen to this special episode to learn how mastering NETWORKING & being a LEADER can catapult you to success!  Follow Melissa Gilbo on Instagram: @melissagilbo Follow Jen Pompilli on Instagram: @wickedsaltylife

Abigail and Savannah analyze the first chapter of the bestselling and award-winning novel REMARKABLY BRIGHt CREATURES by Shelby Van Pelt. This was one of Abigail's favorite reads in 2023, and there are great reasons it received (and continues to receive) such hype! Together, Abigail and Savannah discuss why these opening pages hook readers and set up big picture expectations for the story. Some key elements they take deep dives on include: 7 Key questions to analyze that set up big picture expectations Voice and "attitude" in POV and narratives Character development and relationships Small details that work as great set ups for big pay offs Plus, more! Come study this popular book club fiction novel with Savannah and Abigail and let us know why you think the opening pages hook readers. P.S. Do you enjoy analyzing stories and the writing craft? Learn more about Savannah and Abigail's virtual book club, Book Notes. Sign up for their next meeting or purchase a recording of a past meeting >> Follow Abigail and Savannah: www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo P.S. Don't miss Savannah's podcast, FICTION WRITING MADE EASY! Resources mentioned in this episode:• Remarkably Bright Creatures by Shelby Van Pelt• The Writer's Guide to Beginnings: How to Craft Story Openings That Sell by Paula Munier

Abigail is back with book coach and editor Savannah Gilbo! Today, Abigail and Savannah analyze the first chapter of the bestselling fantasy novel FOURTH WING by Rebecca Yarros. Together, they discuss why these opening pages hook readers and set up big picture expectations for the story. Some key elements they take deep dives on include: How to raise the stakes (and why they're so important) Structuring multiple scenes in a single chapter Romantasy as a genre and New Adult as a category Character development and relationships Plus, more! Come study this popular fantasy novel with Savannah and Abigail and let us know why you think the opening pages hook readers. P.S. Do you enjoy analyzing stories and the writing craft? Learn more about Savannah and Abigail's virtual book club, Book Notes. Sign up for their next meeting or purchase a recording of a past meeting >> Follow Abigail and Savannah: www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo Resources mentioned in this episode: • Fourth Wing by Rebecca Yarros • The Writer's Guide to Beginnings: How to Craft Story Openings That Sell by Paula Munier

Abigail sits down with certified editor and book coach Savannah Gilbo to discuss and analyze the first chapter of Lev Grossman's THE MAGICIANS (and it's a doozy of a first chapter!). Both fantasy lovers, Savannah and Abigail come to this first chapter with a unique approach: Savannah is a super fan of this book and Abigail has only read it once—and several years ago. With these different perspectives, Savannah and Abigail compare their notes to see how this impacts their first chapter analysis and how the opening pages sets up big picture expectations and structures scenes. To do this, they use the 7 key first chapter questions (Paula Munier's THE WRITER'S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS) and Story Grid's five commandments. Plus, Savannah and Abigail dig into other valuable topics like new adult fiction (is it still a thing?), genre, and how/when to break up multiple scenes in a chapter. Why do you think the first chapter in THE MAGICIANS hooks readers? We'd love to hear your perspective! P.S. If you enjoyed these first chapter episodes, you might love Abigail and Savannah's virtual book club, Book Notes. Come join us for our next meeting on November 16, 2023. We are studying the mega-popular fantasy book, THE FOURTH WING by Rebecca Yarros. Learn all about it (and join us!) here! Connect with us: Twitter: @abigailkperry | @savannahgilbo Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.savannahgilbo.com/

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Today, Emily & Rachel talk about building your story with genre with guest Savannah Gilbo. What you'll learn from this episode: Why genre is a really important building block of your story Commercial genre vs content genre 5 things genre can tell us How to use genre to plan your story Get in touch with Savannah! Website: https://www.savannahgilbo.com/ Podcast: Fiction Writing Made Easy, https://www.savannahgilbo.com/podcast Ready to make readers so in love with your characters they can't stop biting their nails in anticipation? Grab The Magic of Character Arcs free email course: www.goldenmayediting.com/arcsmagic Join Tenacious Writing! With the perfect combo of craft, mindset, and community resources, you will build a writing life that feels sustainable, fulfilling, and fun—without any prescriptions or rules. Learn more: https://www.tenaciouswriting.com/ If you enjoyed Story Magic, please rate, review and follow on Apple Podcasts or wherever you listen to this podcast! Follow us on social media! Rachel: https://www.instagram.com/bookcoachrachel/ Emily: https://www.instagram.com/emilygoldenbooks/

In Episode 42, we talk with developmental editor, book coach, and podcaster Savannah Gilbo about crafting a story that works. Specifically, we discuss choosing the writing point of view for your story, and the pros and cons of the most prevalent points of view, first person and third person limited. We also talk about what should go into choosing how many points of view characters your story needs.If you enjoy this episode, you'll also want to listen to or watch Episode 29 with Valerie Francis.Savannah Gilbo's website: https://www.savannahgilbo.com/Barbara Hinske's author website: https://barbarahinske.comJ. W. Judge's author website: https://jwjudge.com

If you're feeling frustrated and isolated, constantly attending networking events and exchanging business cards but never forming genuine connections or receiving the support you crave, then you are not alone! Many female entrepreneurs are stuck in a cycle of surface-level interactions, lacking the deep relationships and supportive networks necessary for true success and fulfillment in business. Meet guests Melissa Gilbo and Amy Pocsik, bursting with energy and enthusiasm and passionate about the power of connecting women. Melissa brings her two decades of experience from the insurance industry and Amy, a transition from her CPA career to a mortgage broker, to their current roles as co-founders of the Women's Business League. Both realized the importance of establishing genuine relationships and supportive networks in strengthening businesses. Fuelled by a shared vision and a growing friendship, they crafted a unique platform that leads with kindness, generosity, and the objective of empowering women. Women's Business League is a community where women connect, grow and prosper. Founded by two North of Boston, MA moms and corporate refugees, Amy Pocsik and Melissa Gilbo, the Women's Business League has reignited the power of networking. The core of their mission is kindness and community, values that drive the connections created amongst its members. Together, Pocsik and Gilbo, have created a community for female entrepreneurs and business women to come together, share resources, and promote their businesses.   Networking doesn't have to suck. We created the Women's Business League because we wanted to build a community that actually brings people together in a meaningful way. - Amy Pocsik It's about being intentional in your networking and building genuine relationships. That's what sets us apart and has made us so successful. - Melissa Gilbo   In this episode, you will be able to: Delve into how purposeful networking can propel women's business trajectory. Unravel the transformative impact of fostering sincere relationships in your business network. Know the key elements in building networking organizations with firm commitments to values. Identify winning strategies to catapult the progress of your business network. Grasp the essence of incorporating support systems, education, and philanthropy in your networking practices.    Connect with your host: I would love to hear how this helped you! Comment on this episode's Instagram post and share how this inspired you. If you have any other tips or ideas leave a comment under the post for this episode on our Instagram page @quotablemediaco or shoot me a DM. You can also connect with us at our Quotable Magazine Instagram account @quotablemagazine For any show ideas, to submit a guest to the podcast, or if you have any questions, please visit https://quotablemediaco.com/podcast. Connect with Amy & Melissa and The Women's Business League: Visit their website at womensbusinessleague.com Connect with them on LinkedIn  Follow along on Instagram and Facebook 

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Abigail is back with book coach and editor Savannah Gilbo! Today, Abigail and Savannah sit down to analyze the first chapter of the bestselling fantasy novel A DISCOVERY OF WITCHES by Deborah Harkness. Together, they discuss why these opening pages hook readers—and model other outstanding elements of fiction, some including: A micro-analysis of a well-structured scene (while planting set ups that pay off later in the book) How this chapter sets up expectations for the main stakes in the novel, the genre of the story, and other important details that impact the characters and plot A debate about the Crisis in the scene (and why a Crisis is so important!) Plus, more! Come study this popular fantasy novel with Savannah and Abigail, and let us know why you think the opening pages hook readers, and encourage them to read more. P.S. Do you enjoy analyzing stories and the writing craft? Learn more about Savannah and Abigail's virtual book club, Book Notes—and sign up for their next meeting! Follow Abigail and Savannah: www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo

A special episode that shares a piece of Abigail and Savannah's May Book Notes meeting! In this episode, Abigail and book coach companion Savannah Gilbo share a piece of their May virtual book club meeting; they take a deep dive into the first chapter (and prologue) of Tracy Deonn's YA fantasy bestseller LEGENDBORN. Here's a preview of what they discuss: First chapter summary How they split the chapter into two scenes (and why these scenes follow the 5 Commandments of Storytelling from Story Grid/Robert McKee) Legendborn's prologue (and prologues in general) Final thoughts and episode recap Links mentioned in this episode: Want to join our book club? Click here to learn more! (Our July book club pick is Bonnie Garmus's major hit, LESSONS IN CHEMISTRY!) Listen to the Fiction Writing Made Easy Podcast with Savannah Gilbo! Follow Abigail and Savannah: www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo

Melissa Gilbo, Co Founder and CEO of Women's Business League, has created a networking community to help women grow their businesses while making powerful, genuine connections. If you are an entrepreneur, business owner, or in the business of relationships, this episode is for you! Melissa is always willing to shout out an "I know someone for that" when the opportunity arises. It is my pleasure to bring you her 'supporting others' mindset. Check out https://womensbusinessleague.com/ for more information about how you can get involved and meet some incredible women!

A special episode that shares a part of Abigail and Savannah's latest Book Notes conversation! In this episode, Abigail and book coach companion Savannah Gilbo share a piece of their latest Book Notes Book Club meeting. Abigail and Savannah started Book Notes, their virtual book club, to teach fiction writers how to read like a writer by (a) reading and analyzing a bestselling book and (b) engaging in a craft-based discussion that spotlights specific elements in fiction that likely made it a popular read. Here, Abigail and Savannah discuss the first chapter of what they argue is V.E. Schwab's novel masterpiece, THE INVISIBLE LIFE OF ADDIE LARUE. Although their full Book Notes discussion covers the entirety of the book—Abigail and Savannah do not think it would be fair to book club attendees if they shared the whole discussion—this episode features the part of that discussion that is their first chapter analysis. Listen to hear what Abigail and Savannah thought about the first chapter's scene structure and how important details set up expectations for the big picture. If you want to learn how to read like a writer (and simultaneously improve your writing craft), you'll enjoy this episode! P.S. If you'd like to learn more about Book Notes, and/or join their next book club meeting, you can do so here. The next Book Notes meeting is on: March 16, 2023 4pm PT / 7pm ET We will study THE GUEST LIST by Lucy Foley Other Resources to Check Out: The Invisible Life of Addie LaRue by V.E. Schwab The Writer's Guide to Beginnings by Paula Munier Story Grid by Shawn Coyne Story by Robert McKee The Guest List by Lucy Foley Follow Abigail and Savannah: www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo And don't miss Savannah's amazing podcast, FICTION WRITING MADE EASY

If you've ever found yourself struggling to categorize your writing or wondering why certain books fit into specific categories, then this episode is for you. We'll start by discussing why genre is essential in fiction writing and how it helps readers find books they enjoy. Next, we'll delve into the two main types of genres: commercial genres and content genres. We'll explain their differences and explore the various sub-genres that fall within each category. Highlights What is genre? What to do when your story fits into multiple categories Five things our content genre can tell you about your story Internal and external genres Avoiding getting overwhelmed How this applies to science fiction and fantasy Resources Mentioned Fiction Writing Made Easy Podcast www.savannahgilbo.com/blog/genre How to Structure a Scene with Emma Dhesi Free Master Class   Sign Up for a FREE 30-Day Trial of the Novel Factory.

This week, book coach and developmental editor Savannah Gilbo joins Abigail for a first chapter deep dive analysis of a Colleen Hoover mega-hit, UGLY LOVE. This is also a particularly special episode because it pulls a small clip from the first meeting of Savannah and Abigail's virtual book club, Book Notes. In this episode, you'll learn how the first chapter of UGLY LOVE gives readers insight into what the Big Picture is all about, and how it works as a well-structured scene that hooks readers. Some key details you'll hear include: What is this story really about and how does the first chapter hint at this? How many scenes exist in this first chapter? What does the structure of the scene look like? How does each scene advance both plot and character? Plus, more... These first chapter deep dive analysis episodes are designed to help you, the burgeoning writer, learn how to improve and master your craft—especially if you want to polish your first pages before querying your dream agent. Not sure what UGLY LOVE is about? Read this blurb from the book's back cover on Amazon: When Tate Collins meets airline pilot Miles Archer, she doesn't think it's love at first sight. They wouldn't even go so far as to consider themselves friends. The only thing Tate and Miles have in common is an undeniable mutual attraction. Once their desires are out in the open, they realize they have the perfect set-up. He doesn't want love, she doesn't have time for love, so that just leaves the sex. Their arrangement could be surprisingly seamless, as long as Tate can stick to the only two rules Miles has for her.Never ask about the past.Don't expect a future. They think they can handle it, but realize almost immediately they can't handle it at all.Hearts get infiltrated.Promises get broken.Rules get shattered.Love gets ugly. Connect with us: Twitter: @abigailkperry | @savannahgilbo Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.savannahgilbo.com/ P.S. Don't miss out on Savannah's amazing podcast for writers: FICTION WRITING MADE EASY

Melissa wakes up everyday excited to help women who are passionate about pursuing their dreams, so they can make an income AND an impact. Her passion is energizing and supporting women to take action in building their dream life. She's proud to be the founder of an organization that is making waves, changing lives and helping women in business achieve their next level.   Her message to female founders, women entrepreneurs, business owners and dream chasers—it is possible. Women's Business League is a community where women connect, grow and prosper. Founded by two North of Boston, MA moms and corporate refugees, Amy Pocsik and Melissa Gilbo, the Women's Business League has reignited the power of networking. The core of their mission is kindness and community, values that drive the connections created amongst its members. Together, Pocsik and Gilbo, have created a community for female entrepreneurs and business women to come together, share resources, and promote their businesses. Website: https://womensbusinessleague.com

What makes us different is that we lead with kindness. We lead with relationships first, and the business comes organically and naturally. -Melissa Gilbo & Amy Pocsik In the spotlight, two moms who were invited by a colleague to meet for coffee. That meeting would change Melissa Gilbo and Amy Pocsik's lives because as they spoke and compared notes about their business careers, they realized what they lacked: a place at the table, a network of support, a community that would lift them up, and which they in turn could nurture and grow as well. It wasn't long before they started meeting regularly and in 2018 Co-Founded the Women's Business League www.womensbusinessleague.com which started out with 5 local chapters and and in just a few years has grown to 45 chapters nationwide. In this interview, the two discuss how they structured the organization based on kindness and connection, managed to inspire their members and grow during the pandemic, and that serving other women sets their hearts on fire. For a dose of keen business smarts and woman-power, hit that download button and please leave us a review.

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Josh Garlepp joins iced out, no stylist - BOOTLEG single - Jimmy James Gilbert calm cleaning ASMR and Gilbo makes the ultimate  choice - Ed Richards jives into the Pod to talk the big game - Wingspan, Real Wide.

Melissa Gilbo is Co-Founder of the Women Business League, heart-centered leader whose universe revolves around her two amazing sons and incredibly supportive husband. Together, they're raising a family on the Northshore of Massachusetts where their roots run deep. From the baseball field to a business meeting, Melissa cares deeply about relationships. For 20 years, Melissa worked in the insurance industry helping clients protect what matters most to them. She's a firm believer that developing partnerships, establishing connections, and strengthening community ties are all crucial to success. Melissa is most passionate about helping women reach their next level, with a knack for creating opportunities and a flair for marketing campaigns that she applies everyday in building the Women's Business League brand.

As the saying goes, "if you want to go fast, go alone, but if you want to go far, bring company." This couldn't be truer for the dynamic duo, Melissa Gilbo and Amy Pocsik, founders of the Women's Business League. After experiencing the shortcomings and challenges of networking for women, Melissa Gilbo and Amy Pocsik launched the Women's Business League (WBL), a national networking community for female entrepreneurs and businesswomen. When the business began to snowball and catapult their own efforts, both women left their six-figure salaries to pour their passion and experience into WBL. And they've never looked back. WBL now has 40 chapters, which are located in over 14 states and growing. More from Amy and Melissa: Women's Business League - https://womensbusinessleague.com/  IG - @womensbusinessleague FB - Women's Business League Giveaways: One lucky listener will be receiving a free one-hour entrepreneurial coaching session from Melissa and Amy.

Bobo is Hollywood. Khaloko is Hollywood. Gilbo is Hollywood. Andres is not Hollywood. We talk scoot'n around Tulsa, foster tears, and lamination machines. Sponsors: Go to www.hellotushy.com/tigerbelly to get TEN PERCENT OFF PLUS FREE SHIPPING.  Go to www.brooklinen.com and use promo code TIGER to get $20 off. Get 2021 off to a great start by visiting www.Shipstation.com. Just use my offer code, BELLY, to get a 60-day free trial If you want to start living a happier life today. As a listener, you’ll get 10% off your first month by visiting our sponsor at www.betterhelp.com/belly. See omnystudio.com/listener for privacy information.

Our TYCOONO TALK podcast host Bethany, interviews Melissa Gilbo and Amy Pocsik, Co-Founders of the Women's Business League, to discuss how women's networking is pivoting amidst this pandemic.   The COVID-19 crisis has filled business owners across the globe with uncertainty about what's to come.  Conversation topics focus on pivoting strategies, do's and don't of budgeting, and relying on community feedback amidst a recession. Times are tough for business owners, that's an undeniable truth. However, what happens when an already marginalized part of society gets hit with even more unexpected adversity?  For the 12.3 million women in the founder's chair across America, lack of access to things like capital and cash flow has been a continuous hurdle. The halt of the global economy adds another layer of complexity to the problem. Now more than ever it's imperative for women to band together and drive relationship-based sales, as we all navigate how to continue marketing in the new normal to stay afloat/thrive.   While traditional in-person networking is challenging with today's restrictions, organizations like the Women's Business League have pivoted to engage members through virtual avenues. Founded by two moms/corporate refugees, Amy Pocsik and Melissa Gilbo, the Women's Business League has reignited the power of networking, especially during trying times. The core of their mission is inspiration and encouragement, values that drive the connections created amongst its members. Together, Pocsik and Gilbo, have created a safe haven for female entrepreneurs and innovators to come together, share resources, and promote their businesses.    

Like many in her age group (and outside of it), Savannah Gilbo looked to the Harry Potter series for adventure, life lessons, fun, and escape. In this meaningful conversation, Abigail talks to Savannah about how Harry Potter supported her during her growing up years, and how fantasy stories like Rowling’s masterpiece continue to reinforce the precious balance of innocence and sophistication in her personal and professional life. Listen to this episode to reflect on the invaluable gift beloved series like Harry Potter can have on a person, while also learning how you can salvage and support real magic in your everyday life. Email Abigail at abigailkperry [AT] gmail [DOT] com to continue the conversation. *****Interested in some other topics discussed in this podcast? Explore these resources for your own creative journey. Savannah Gilbo: Visit Savannah’s website to learn about her editing and book coaching services. And listen to her podcast! Harry Potter Story Grid Masterworks – Stay tuned! Savannah, Abigail, and their Story Grid companions Renee Decker and Ben Wilkinson are working hard on these resourceful manuscripts that break down the Harry Potter series using the Story Grid method. An insightful writing resource for your writing craft! Intro Music: “Open Those Bright Eyes” by Kevin MacLeod, edited for this podcast’s intro and closing. License: Creative Commons

Bobo wants a different sleeve. Koloko digs out her survival kit. Gilbo wants zombie flu. We talkin' birds... and Billy the Magician, Gabby the sturgeon, 20,000 bottles of water, and vampire diva cups.   Nominate Bobby into Poway Hall of Fame Steebeeweebee Music   SPONSORS: Get 20% Off AND Free Shipping, at Manscaped.com with the code SLEPT Postmates is giving our listeners ONE HUNDRED DOLLARS of free delivery credit for your first SEVEN days. To start your free deliveries, download the app and use code BELLY

In this episode of Let's Talk League, Big Spooky and Hoje talk about the state of the meta for each lanes, and make recommendations for who to play in patch 10.3. They also talk about recent LCS news, and debate the viability for the new playoff structure for spring and summer of 2020. You can watch the video on Youtube here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=saH_zuiZ1-s You can reach out to Big Spooky and Hoje for questions and comments on their respective Instagrams, Gilbo.Swaggins and Hojemania. Music by Josh Leake. Timestamps:0:40 - Intro3:20 - Meta champs for each lane27:17 - LCS and international news44:06 - 2020 spring & summer split playoff structure 

In this episode of Let's Talk League, Big Spooky and Hoje talk about the patch 10.3 notes as well as the first two weeks of the 2020 LCS season. You can reach out to Big Spooky and Hoje for questions and comments on their respective Instagrams, Gilbo.Swaggins and Hojemania. Music by Josh Leake. Timestamps:0:31 - Intro2:23 - Patch 10.3 Notes28:00 - LCS news

Adelaide's own, Chris aka Gilbo aka Alpharius joins Jackie for a run down of Act of Heresy V, his hobby background and chat about what's shaking in the South Australian Horus Heresy scene.He's a champ and I've loved kicking it with him briefly at events, fingers crossed EFTW can get down to Adelaide for the July Heresy event.- JackieDownload here!

In this episode of Let's Talk League, Big Spooky and Hoje feature teammates Caleb "LeakePipes" Leake and Noah "Cannoli Cowboy" Miller, to play the game "LCS Draft". You can reach out to Big Spooky and Hoje for questions and comments on their respective Instagrams, Gilbo.Swaggins and Hojemania as well as guests LeakeyPipes and Cannoli Cowboy at CalebMLeake and NDM6624 respectively. Music by Josh Leake. Timestamps:0:32 - Intro Guests1:15 - Intro Game, LCS Draft16:49 - Play LCS Draft

In this episode of Let's Talk League, Big Spooky and Hoje feature teammate and fellow podcaster, Dave "Scørpio" Leake to talk about their second week of play in the Hextech Clash tournament. They also discuss briefly the changes in patch 9.24b, updates in international news, and power rankings for Support for the 2020 LCS season. You can reach out to Big Spooky and Hoje for questions and comments on their respective Instagrams, Gilbo.Swaggins and Hojemania as well as guest star Dave Leake on his instagram, Dave.Leake. Music by Josh Leake. Timestamps:0:36 - Intro Guest1:32 - Week 2 of Hextech Clash tournament Recap31:11 - Patch 9.24b34:19 - International News39:15 - LCS Power Rankings for Sup

In this episode of Let’s Talk League, Big Spooky and Hoje talk about their Hextech Clash tournament results as well as the newly released patch 9.24 updates. They also discuss recent international news, and power rankings for Mid and ADC for the 2020 LCS season. You can reach out to Big Spooky and Hoje for questions and comments on their respective Instagrams, Gilbo.Swaggins and Hojemania. Music by Josh Leake. Timestamps:0:31 - Intro & Hextech Clash tournament recap9:18 - Patch 9.24 Updates25:40 - International News34:16 - LCS Power Rankings for Mid and ADC 

In this episode of Let's Talk League, Big Spooky and Hoje talk about big picture strategies to consider when playing league as well as who to play right now in solo queue. They also discuss recent international news, and power rankings for Top and Jungle for the 2020 LCS season. You can reach out to Big Spooky and Hoje for questions and comments on their respective Instagrams, Gilbo.Swaggins and Hojemania. Music by Josh Leake. Timestamps:0:25 - Intro2:23 - Team Strategies and champs to play in solo queue31:33 - International News35:26 - LCS Power Rankings for Top and Jungle

In this episode of Let's Talk League, Big Spooky and Hoje talk about their experiences on pre-season patch 9.23 as well as what champions are good/will be good in the current meta. They also discuss what they like and don't like about North American teams based off of their recent free agency moves. You can reach out to Big Spooky and Hoje for questions and comments on their respective Instagrams, Gilbo.Swaggins and Hojemania. Music by Josh Leake. Timestamps:0:27 - Big Spooky's Announcement2:26 - 9.23 Runes, Items, Jungle Pathing advice23:13 - Meta Predictions for each lane38:33 - LCS Roster Updates55:48 - International News

In this episode of Let's Talk League, Big Spooky and Hoje talk about roster moves during free agency as well as the big jungle and item changes happening on the 9.23 pre-season patch. You can reach out to Big Spooky and Hoje for questions and comments on their respective Instagrams, Gilbo.Swaggins and Hojemania. Music by Josh Leake. Timestamps:0:30 - World 2019 Finals Recap2:25 - Emerging region import update6:05 - Roster moves in LCS44:15 - Patch 9.23

Dumbfoundead auditions. Bobo auditions too. So does Gilbo...and Koloko. We talk ecstasy daddies, condor shit, a dick bone, and the blue blue sky.  Bonus content every Monday: https://www.patreon.com/TigerBelly Sponsor Links: http://leesa.com/belly https://www.ridgewallet.com Promo Code: BELLY  

Bobo wants a cookie. Khaloko fear-farts. Gilbo accepts an Emmy. George is White Nothing. We talk personality changes over the years, a coyote hunter, and a panic at the ball. Bonus content every Monday:  https://www.patreon.com/TigerBelly Sponsor Links:  http://leesa.com/belly  http://ridgewallet.com/tigerbelly Promo Code: TIGERBELLY Get $100 credit on the Postmates App with the promo code BELLY

With a little help from friends, Gilbo, Koloko, and PinkDick attempt to turn their captain’s birthday frown upside down. We talk ligament cakes, a Brazilian body spray, and a Frank Sinatra moment. Premium Episodes every Monday. https://www.patreon.com/TigerBelly Sponsor Links: https://www.ridgewallet.com Promo Code: TIGERBELLY https://www.blueapron.com/belly 

Bobo is a magician. Koloko is pop quizzed. Gilbo turns 29. We talk spiritual awakenings, Oliver Twist, and sing for our beloved Brownskin Foreskin GGboy Gabriel Flat Face Gilbo Baggins. Patreon: http://patreon.com/tigerbelly Sponsor Links: https://www.ridgewallet.com/ Promo Code: TIGERBELLY https://www.forhims.com/belly https://www.brooklinen.com Promo Code: TIGERBELLY

Bobo can’t chew and walk. Koloko, Gilbo, and PD are YesMen. We talk Spacey, Code of Hammurabi, and a fancy plague named after the King.  Bonus Content on Mondays: http://patreon.com/tigerbelly  Sponsor Links: http://www.blueapron.com/belly http://leesa.com/belly http://ridgewallet.com/ Promo Code: TIGERBELLY

Bobo is a gash. Koloko is v blue. Gilbo is a delivery boy. We talk our insecurities, gold mines, five hundred dollar limits, and a meat foot. Patreon announcement. http://patreon.com/tigerbelly Sponsor Links: https://www.forhims.com/belly https://www.brooklinen.com Promo Code: TIGERBELLY https://www.ridgewallet.com Promo Code: TIGERBELLY

Theo plays chess. Bobo has a kazoo. Khaloko is a plant. Gilbo is on a boat. We talk Inner Light, the dark arts, vagerries, island mahogany, and the top 300 million Christians in the world. Sponsor Link: https://www.ridgewallet.com Promo Code: TIGERBELLY

Bobo is the Ice King. Khaloko laughs at a funeral. Gilbo is quizzed on his love. George wears a special tee. We talk mental prisons, a balancing act, and a birthday bonanza. https://www.blueapron.com/belly

We talk dirty debutantes, lifelong lies, and bathtub crystals. Bobo is muy sleepy. Koloko finds a glass menagerie. Gilbo thinks marital.  Listen to us on Spotify. https://www.blueapron.com/BELLY www.brooklinen.com Promo Code: Belly

Bobo and Dante hold hands. Khaloko loves ogres. Gilbo is hungry. We talk park scuffles, defectors, and our beloved Tom Hanks.

Bobo is very sleepy. Khaloko double pees. Gilbo gets rice cooker’d. Pink Dick knows Job. We talk death clouds, tentacles, sudden deafness, and brittle bones.     

Bobo finds a pebble. Khaloko has turkey day blues. Gilbo goes for the heartburn. We talk the Sin of Onan, broken mannequin heads, and the goosh gash. #smellded #hellven #yeahnene      

Bobo crunches plastic. Khaloko has a foot ritual. Gilbo is the next lover. George is a piece of wood. We talk farmer love, spa winners, and learned helplessness.

Bart has Japanese candy nipples. Bobo is Tommy. Khaloko slam winks. Gilbo has silver dollar pancakes. We talk Buffalo Bill, OJ, and anger itches.

Bobo chops logs. Khaloko wants the booty. Gilbo is JoJo. We talk Wonder Woman, cosmetic stubble, and a Dream Powder Contest.

Bobo soaps and steams. Koloko likes fancy eggs. Gilbo bets his foreskin. George is a toucan. We talk gang wars, skin permeability, and cocktagons.

Bobo runs into an old friend. Khaloko's tears have dried. Gilbo receives a threat. We talk Mother's Day, nuclear preparedness, and water buffaloes.

Bobo dabs (tries to.) Koloko gets an early vday gift. Gilbo is Judas. We talk prison escapes, underground bunkers, and a gay plot twist.

Bobo is the opposite of woke. Khaloko calls out the king. Gilbo gets throat punched by Jackie. We talk Miss Universe, Almodovar, and a mainline to heaven.

Bobo stalls the rental. Khaloko doesn't blow smoke when smoke is needed. Gilbo is eating again. We talk Meryl, man school, and long lost families.

Bobo finally achieves a goal. Khaloko has resentments. Gilbo has a secret patch on the left. Bryce makes his debut. We talk insecurities, abominations, and the deep purple.   Recorded November 21, 2016 Music by Bobby Lee Instagram: @tigerbelly Twitter: @thetigerbelly YouTube.com/tigerbelly Facebook: thetigerbelly www.thetigerbelly.com

Gilbo is captain in this fast sinking ship. Recorded live during election night tally.

Bobo is trending. Khaloko Moko plays with tic tacs. Gilbo does a spread eagle. We talk floating tennis balls, boomshakalaka, and our deepest darkest secret.   Recorded Oct 31, 2016 Music by Bobby Lee Instagram: @tigerbelly Twitter: @thetigerbelly YouTube.com/tigerbelly Facebook: thetigerbelly www.thetigerbelly.com

Bobo pleads to Moses. Khaloko is a bad girl scout. Gilbo is Elephant Man. We talk a buzzfeed boycott, Cleopatra on a cloud, and our top 5 scary movies.   Recorded October 14, 2016 Music by Bobby Lee Instagram: @tigerbelly Twitter: @thetigerbelly YouTube.com/tigerbelly Facebook: thetigerbelly www.thetigerbelly.com

Adelaide singer Mark Oates joined the program to discuss an innovative project with Aerial Artists Adelaide. There were a whole lot of other things covered such as; suitcases full of cocaine, queue-rage and going full Gilbo!

Bobo is no Superman. Khaly watches a different CNN. Gilbo likes the dangerous sport of hickey. We talk podcast celebrities, du30, and zombies all over the world.   Recorded September 12, 2016 Music by Bobby Lee Instagram: @tigerbelly Twitter: @thetigerbelly YouTube.com/tigerbelly Facebook: thetigerbelly www.thetigerbelly.com

Bobby is King Eggroll. Steeb is desperate for Ramona. Khaly prefers it under 10 minutes. Gilbo puts balls to controller. "Fantasy. Life is an illusion. It's how you perceive it. Wake up, open your eyes, and believe." -Admiral Bobo Lee.

Bobo has a new weapon of choice. Khalyla is threatened by this weapon of choice.  Gilbo is accused of inappropriate gift giving. We talk Brooke Shields, the magic of turns, and long walks in the wild.   Recorded June 1, 2016 Music by Bobby Lee Instagram: @tigerbelly Twitter: @thetigerbelly YouTube.com/tigerbelly Facebook: thetigerbelly www.thetigerbelly.com

Mothers mean so much to us. And rather than give 1 measly day, we’ve decided to stretch Mothers day for the entire month! Welcome to our First Annual: Mothers Day Movie Month! Week 3 (Finale) This week, the BSX gang (+1) celebrate time honored tradition that is, having our good friend Gilbo around while it’s […]

Bobo is captain.   Khaloko is first officer.   Gilbo is flight engineer.   We talk about Asians in the desert, the power distance index, and a bruised titty.   Recorded May 16, 2016 Music by Bobby Lee Instagram: @tigerbelly Twitter: @thetigerbelly YouTube: TigerBelly Facebook: thetigerbelly www.thetigerbelly.com

Bobo has a nightmare audition. Khalyla gives Pacman a pass... sort of. Gilbo is triggered to tears. We talk radioactive watermelons, a butterfinger stash, and why Maurice hates Asians.   Recorded February 22, 2016 Music by Bobby Lee Instagram: @tigerbelly Twitter: @thetigerbelly www.thetigerbelly.com

Our pal Asa gets healed by a quack. Bobby receives the best haircut of his life. Khalyla finally gets some support on the analingus debate. Gilbo is smitten after someone calls him "a catch." We walk down a memory lane lined with OxyContin, write letters to inmates, and fall in love with Suki all over again.   Recorded February 15, 2016 Music by Bobby Lee Instagram: @tigerbelly Twitter: @thetigerbelly www.thetigerbelly.com